At first, what Lamont’s eyes told him he was seeing was a giant millipede. He quickly realized that he had to force himself to notice a multitude of details before his brain was willing to begin creating a new category for the creatures.
Especially liking the way you unfold the details without a hyperbole of tension or cliffhangers. Unpredicatable story for me, so very rewarding to read each installment, here's to hoping writing each gives you as much joy. Greetings from The Netherlands, Wiebren
Thank you so much for the feedback, Wiebren! Reader comments like this give me the fuel to get up early every day and keep writing. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story, and I look forward to sending more surprises your way!
This gradually keeps getting better.
Especially liking the way you unfold the details without a hyperbole of tension or cliffhangers. Unpredicatable story for me, so very rewarding to read each installment, here's to hoping writing each gives you as much joy. Greetings from The Netherlands, Wiebren
Thank you so much for the feedback, Wiebren! Reader comments like this give me the fuel to get up early every day and keep writing. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story, and I look forward to sending more surprises your way!